Project Rhapsody

RHAPSODY-Exalted or excessively enthusiastic expression of feeling in speech or writing. A literary work written in an impassioned or exalted style. A state of elated bliss; ecstasy. An ancient Greek epic poem or a portion of one suitable for uninterrupted recitation. An epic poem adapted for recitation. Whatever your form of poetry-it is a rhapsody of words! Welcome to The SJC Poetry Blog for Literature Students!

Sunday, February 19, 2006

My Fake Plastic Love

He looks like a real thing.
He tastes like a real love.
He smells like a real man.
He speaks like a real person.
He acts like a real soul.

But he feels like a real fake,
I'm just a rubber soul,
loving him,
it wears me out.
It wears me away.

Loo Hui Ping
4E

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is he a doll or what? Hehe, just wanna know... :P Or something like a fantasy? Anything to do with plastic surgery?

1:30 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

oh man, it sounds good, but i dun understand actually, can explain?

4:13 PM  
Blogger HUI PING said...

yup, Zakiah, sort of like that.
it actually can refer to a lot of things, like ur love gone thru plastic surgery to look good, or some puppy love stuffs.

the fact that im a rubber soul shows my elastic property, i can 'stretch' to accept him being like this, but apparently its just too much so it 'wears' me out.
hope u do see the link of wearing out a rubber and wearing meaning tiring.

8:19 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I see, I see... Very interesting hor. Thanks for elaborating :P

10:22 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

oh, thanks for explaining the rubber soul! cos i tot rubber soul means fake soul.

10:32 PM  

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