Terry
Dedicated to my dad above, Terry. I love you daddy.
This sounds like a drama serial.
I walked in
asking God to grant him will
to fight Death off
so I may never see my mummy tear.
slowly, my feet dragging…
Moments before that,
I was talking to a friend.
Saying how much I regret
for not treating him like a dad.
Then came another call,
it is from my brother.
He said
“I think you better come up now,”
“I think…he…he is leaving.”
I rushed up,
hoping that God can give me time.
There I see my mum crying,
she told me he is waiting.
So I held his hand
and called him…
‘Dad.’
I ran out of the ward,
unable to stay in there anymore.
Then the news came,
the news I never wanted to hear:
He’s gone.
Then I started to realize
my dad loved me the most.
He waited till I was there
then agreed to go.
He will always be in my heart,
oh yes, he will be.
He is the best dad one can have
and his name is Terry.
Jaime Wong
4H

7 Comments:
This is really good Jaime,
You tugged my heart-strings.
:) Love you!
jaime!
it's really really sweet!
two thumbs up! =)
i really cried jamie. you're a strong girl.
aw man thanks guys. means alot! :)
Hey Jaime, is it true he really passed away? It's very touching man... U've proven true love of a child towards her father...
thanks again guys!! and er ya its true but it happened like 3 yrs ago and i never really write sth for him and it just came a few days ago and i thought it would be really important for me to dedicate this to him. so i hope that no one would think that im trying to gain pity or whatever k? haha thanks!!
No lah, it's not gaining sympathy or wat, but it's very, very touching. I nearly cried reading this. :)
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