Darkness
The world is gone,
I cannot see,
What lies before and after me.
I cannot run,
Nor can I hide,
From the darkness that is deep inside.
The truth is here,
And very bare,
Never have I known it had been there.
As I fall into a pit of darkness and despair,
I do not know why,
I do not care,
I feel nothing but the wind in my hair.
I can no longer stand it,
I take the final plunge,
I shed my final tear,
As I forever disappear.
Rachel Linn Braberry
3 Justice
posted by Debra @ 9:55 PM
1 Comments:
rachel darling, i am sorry to say this, but this one was very fake. your structuring of the poem was good, so as to speak, but i didn't get one thing clearly enough.
what is your point?
make your work a little bit more clearer, would you?
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