Time
Especially for the’ Just kidding’ pals.
So perfect was everything.
Tick. Tick.
Time was never on our list.
We had joy
We had fun
We had prata in the sun.
"Kosong, Cheese, Egg, Tissue"
How happy we were together.
The sun always shines
Twinkling our smiles.
Nonsense was our game
Thickskiness was the theme.
Laughter was never abandoned
Carefree was every one.
How happy we were together.
So perfect was everything.
How happy we were together.
Time was not our friend.
Parents rant but still we went on
The night conversation
Till midnight strikes
Sharing laughter, tears and joy.
How happy we were together my friends.
How happy we are now.
Julianna Iris Tan
4 Justice
posted by Debra @ 6:25 PM
9 Comments:
haha.. way to go pal!!! awesome!!! rawk on!!! =)
-Jerry Alexander-
hello Julie!
your poem's really sweet. :)
and i think it captures the essence of our budding friendship! heh.
the last part seems rather bittersweet though, since the last sentence's so sharp and short.
'How happy we are now' - the now part lends a sense of the transient nature of the happiness.
nonetheless, i like it!
Hey both, thanks!
Hey Juls! This is such an optimistic poem. I like the first stanza very much, it's humorous. Haha, ok, keep on writing... :P
we had joy, we had fun, we had 'prata in the sun' LOL! such a funny poem!
hey juls. it seems so familar haha.. its really nice with your own special touch in it
love u nadine
now go and comment on mine!
is it just me, or is this something to the tune of seasons in the sun??
soz, just feel like its like that.
Hello guys, thanks! erm yes sheefa, it is somewhat to the tune of seasons in the sun! (:
I thought we were supposed to come up with something original....
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